Monday, April 9, 2012

CHAPTER 1

can you feel it gripping all over your shoulder ?

yeah i know you can cuz i can tell it hurts like that

make you want to cry and shit

(he held off on telling her more...she was scared / confused enough as it was / is / )

i think i know what you mean - the girl says

i know you do baby i know you can feel this feelings im trying to get acrosss to you

it hurts doesnt it

having a feeling t hat you feel so deep and intense that you cant get out with traditional words n shit

dont be silent bitch. talk to me girl.

(she blink and opens her mouth and then closes it. then looks down at the trash. a beer can and a little reciept from the corner store all mushed up with mud and rain)

they kiss but her lips and mouth are too small and tounge is almost non existent

INSIDE " does this bitch have no tounge/ did he tounge get cut off?)

she pulls away and walks off

he shrugs and beins to uncountrably shake hard


AAAHGH

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